Cold Eye delivers professional revision notes on your screenplay — five priorities, page-anchored beats, and concrete rewrite moves you can take to your desk in the morning. No hedging. No grades. No verdicts.
Upload a feature screenplay PDF. We read it cover to cover and deliver a revision worksheet — not a coverage report. The worksheet is nine sections: a structural opening observation, a Quick Read with a sliding-scale leverage line, the Top 5 revision priorities (each with a diagnosis, page-anchored beats, and one concrete rewrite move), a structural walk, character notes, dialogue notes, scene diagnostics, a reader-experience pass, and a numbered rewrite plan.
Every claim is page-cited. Every priority names the specific beat in question. Every recommendation is an action you take in your next session — not a principle. The voice is clinical, the tone is direct, and the bones don't move: same shape, every script, every time.
$24.99
The full nine-section revision worksheet — Starting Points, Quick Read, Top 5 Revision Priorities, Structural Walk, Character Notes, Dialogue Notes, Scene Diagnostics, Reader Experience, and a Rewrite Plan. Delivered as a polished PDF and a markdown file. One price, no tiers, no upsells.
A polished PDF stamped with your name, the script title, and the date — plus the same content in markdown so you can paste it into your tracking sheet. Average turnaround is under fifteen minutes from upload.
We don't grade your script. We don't decide whether it should get made. We don't soften criticism with hedging language or pad reports with generic encouragement. We delete your uploaded script the moment your report is generated — we keep your coverage, not your screenplay — and we never use it to train AI. Details in our Privacy Policy.